ENGL0150/Unit 3 · Patient CommunicationTopic 62 sessions

Writing Clear Patient Instructions

Workplace product

Patient instruction sheet

Course goals advanced

  • 3. Patient-Centered Communication
  • 1. Grammar and Sentence Competency
  • 2. Professional Workplace Writing

Spiraling back

This topic revisits grammar you met earlier, in a harder context: Topic 2, Topic 3.

Essential Question

How do I communicate healthcare information so a patient can actually understand and use it?

Teaching & Learning Concepts

The communication principles, workplace expectations, and healthcare context behind this topic.

  • Health literacy — a large share of adults find standard medical instructions hard to act on, and that says nothing about their intelligence
  • Medical jargon versus patient-friendly language
  • Sequencing: instructions in the order the patient will do them
  • Audience awareness — you are not writing for a colleague
  • Tell the patient what to do, rather than only giving them information

Grammar Focus

A small set of high-value grammar skills, tied directly to this topic's communication task.

Strong sentences

  • Simple versus complex sentences, and why simple usually wins in instructions
  • Sentence fragments — and the one place they are acceptable
  • Run-ons and comma splices
  • Transition words that show sequence: first, next, then, after, finally

Imperative sentences

  • The imperative gives a direct instruction: 'Take one tablet each morning'
  • The subject 'you' is understood rather than written
  • Imperatives are shorter and clearer than 'the patient should' constructions

Healthcare Vocabulary

This topic's spelling and usage words. Earlier lists spiral forward — turn them on to review.

Word Bank — List 6

Flip each card for the meaning and an example.

Formative Practice

Guided activities and short exercises. None of this is graded — it is here so you can find out what you know before it counts.

Translate the jargon

Match each clinical term to plain language, then practice saying it to a patient.

  • hypertension

  • NPO after midnight

  • administer topically

  • adverse reaction

  • ambulate

  • contraindicated

Put the instructions in a safe order

These wound-care steps are scrambled. Order them the way the patient will actually do them.

Practice only — nothing here is graded or recorded.

  1. Wash your hands again.

  2. Wash your hands with soap and water.

  3. Pat the skin around the wound dry with a clean towel.

  4. Rinse the wound gently with clean water.

  5. Put on a new bandage.

  6. Take off the old bandage and throw it away.

Fix confusing instructions

Each of these was given to a real-seeming patient and did not work. Rewrite it.

Self-scored practice. Your writing stays in this browser.

  • As written

    Patient should administer the prescribed analgesic PRN for post-operative discomfort and monitor the incision site for signs of infection.

    The problem: Written for a colleague. 'Analgesic', 'PRN', 'post-operative', and 'signs of infection' all assume training the patient does not have.

    Write your version first — comparing before you try teaches nothing.

  • As written

    Take your medication regularly and be sure to stay well hydrated throughout the day.

    The problem: 'Regularly' and 'well hydrated' mean nothing specific. The patient cannot follow this even if they want to.

    Write your version first — comparing before you try teaches nothing.

  • As written

    If symptoms worsen or fail to improve within an appropriate timeframe, contact the office.

    The problem: The patient does not know what 'worsen' means here or what an appropriate timeframe is. Under pressure they will guess, and they may guess late.

    Write your version first — comparing before you try teaches nothing.

Fragments, run-ons, and the imperative

The sentence grammar that makes instructions work.

Practice only — nothing here is graded or recorded.

  • Which is the clearest instruction for a patient?
  • Which sentence is a run-on that needs fixing?
  • Which transition word best signals that this is the last step?
  • Which sentence uses 'once' and 'ones' correctly?

Words to spell — List 6

Flip each card for the meaning and an example.

Cumulative Workplace Product

Combine this topic's grammar, vocabulary, and communication skills into something you would actually produce at work.

Patient instruction sheet

Write a one-page instruction sheet a patient could follow at home without calling for clarification. Use imperatives, number the steps, replace every piece of jargon, and say specifically when to call the office and when to call 911.

Scenario

Choose one: caring for a wound after minor stitches; preparing for a procedure that requires nothing to eat or drink after midnight; taking a new blood pressure medication; or monitoring blood pressure at home with a cuff.

Submit through Brightspace. This page is for drafting and self-checking.

Revision & Reflection

Review your work against the Communication Check, then name one thing to improve next time.

Communication Check

Check your own writing against all five. Not graded — saved in this browser only.

Communication Check — check each criterion your writing meets

Think about

  • Give your sheet to someone outside healthcare. Ask them to tell you what they would do first — not whether it makes sense.
  • Did you say what to do, or only what the situation is?
  • Is there any word on the page you would not use with a neighbor?

Before You Leave

  • Matched all six jargon terms and drafted plain-language explanations
  • Put the wound-care steps into a safe order
  • Rewrote all three confusing instructions
  • Drafted the instruction sheet and checked it against the Communication Check