ENGL0150/Unit 6 · Advanced TopicsAdvanced · optional1 session

HIPAA, Confidentiality & Ethical Writing

Workplace product

Confidentiality incident / case response

Course goals advanced

  • 4. Documentation-Style Writing and Professional Responsibility
  • 2. Professional Workplace Writing
  • 3. Patient-Centered Communication

Spiraling back

This topic revisits grammar you met earlier, in a harder context: Topic 3, Topic 7.

Essential Question

What should I communicate, to whom, and how much information is appropriate?

Teaching & Learning Concepts

The communication principles, workplace expectations, and healthcare context behind this topic.

  • The minimum necessary principle — disclose what the purpose requires and no more
  • Confidentiality in writing, including in messages you consider informal
  • Appropriate audience: who actually needs to know this?
  • Professional boundaries in written communication
  • Public versus private communication, and how easily the line moves
  • Digital communication risks — forwarding, screenshots, and shared screens

Grammar Focus

A small set of high-value grammar skills, tied directly to this topic's communication task.

Clarity and precision

  • Vague pronouns that leave the reader guessing who is meant
  • Ambiguous wording that could describe two different situations
  • Pronoun–noun agreement
  • Revising unclear sentences until only one reading is possible

Healthcare Vocabulary

This topic's spelling and usage words. Earlier lists spiral forward — turn them on to review.

Word Bank — List 11

Flip each card for the meaning and an example.

Formative Practice

Guided activities and short exercises. None of this is graded — it is here so you can find out what you know before it counts.

Who needs to know?

For each disclosure, decide whether it meets the minimum necessary standard.

Practice only — nothing here is graded or recorded.

  • Sending records for one date of service to a specialist who requested them for that visit.

    Sort this statement
  • Sending the complete chart because it is quicker than pulling the relevant pages.

    Sort this statement
  • Telling a colleague on the care team the patient's diagnosis so they can prepare the room appropriately.

    Sort this statement
  • Mentioning in the break room that a patient you both know came in today.

    Sort this statement
  • Answering a spouse's phone question about the visit, with no authorization on file.

    Sort this statement
  • Including the diagnosis code on a claim submitted to the patient's insurer.

    Sort this statement
Sort all 6 first.

Rewrite the unsafe message

Each of these was sent. Rewrite so it does the job without the exposure.

Self-scored practice. Your writing stays in this browser.

  • As written

    Team — heads up that Maria Alvarez from the front desk's sister is coming in this afternoon for the thing we talked about. Be discreet!

    The problem: Names the patient, identifies her by her relationship to a staff member, hints at the condition, and broadcasts it to a group. 'Be discreet' does not undo any of that.

    Write your version first — comparing before you try teaches nothing.

  • As written

    She said she'd been having those symptoms since the thing last year and she thinks it might be related to it.

    The problem: Every noun has been replaced by a pronoun or 'thing'. A reader cannot tell what symptoms, what event, or what she thinks is related.

    Write your version first — comparing before you try teaches nothing.

Words to spell — List 11

Flip each card for the meaning and an example.

Cumulative Workplace Product

Combine this topic's grammar, vocabulary, and communication skills into something you would actually produce at work.

Confidentiality incident / case response

Analyze a confidentiality scenario and produce an appropriate written response: what happened, who needed to know, what should have been disclosed instead, and what you would do now.

Submit through Brightspace. This page is for drafting and self-checking.

Revision & Reflection

Review your work against the Communication Check, then name one thing to improve next time.

Communication Check

Check your own writing against all five. Not graded — saved in this browser only.

Communication Check — check each criterion your writing meets

Think about

  • For each disclosure in your response, name the purpose it served.
  • Would the patient be comfortable reading what you wrote about them?
  • Is there anything here that identifies the patient indirectly?