Observation, Reporting, and Professional Conduct
Writing a report that holds up, and handling people without escalating.
By the end of this lesson you can
- Write an incident report that is factual and defensible
- Distinguish observation from conclusion
- De-escalate a confrontation verbally
- Describe conduct expectations, including on discrimination
Lesson Notes
Read through the key concepts before you try the challenge.
The report may be read in court
You are writing up an incident at the end of a shift.
You write that a man was acting suspiciously and appeared intoxicated. Eighteen months later, in a deposition, you are asked what suspiciously means and how you established intoxication. Neither is a fact you observed — they are conclusions you drew, and you cannot support either.
Your task: Learn to write reports that survive being read years later by someone looking for weaknesses.
| Write this | Not this |
|---|---|
| Subject was unsteady and his speech was slurred | Subject was drunk |
| Subject walked the same aisle four times and looked toward the office repeatedly | Subject was acting suspiciously |
| Subject raised his voice and pointed at me | Subject became aggressive |
| I observed a broken window pane, approximately 30 cm across | Someone broke in |
| Subject stated, “I work here” | Subject claimed to be an employee |
| Subject declined to provide identification | Subject refused to cooperate |
| Element | Detail |
|---|---|
| Who | People involved, described or named, and witnesses |
| What | What happened, in the order it happened |
| When | Specific times, not 'around midnight' |
| Where | Exact location on the property |
| How | The sequence, as observed |
| Action taken | What you did and who you notified, with times |
Which sentence belongs in an incident report?
Challenge
Apply what you've learned in this lesson.
Report writing improves fastest by rewriting bad reports.
- Rewrite each conclusion in the table as an observation, without using the original word.
- Write a full incident report for an invented event covering all six elements.
- Research verbal de-escalation and write down five specific techniques.
- Write down what you would record if you had grounds to be concerned about someone, in terms that could not be read as discriminatory.
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